Today we were learning about time. Here are some children showing a time they made and could tell.
Thursday, June 10, 2010
Writer's Notebook
Here is a narrative written by Lachlan.
THE GALAXY FIGHT
One day at Earth, Captain Lachlan and Commander Daniel were going to the moon on
their spaceship. Everyone was cheering for them when they went aboard. In 10 seconds was the lift off and then they took off.
They were in space at last. Commander Daniel said, “Look, there’s the moon!” Captain Lachlan said, “We are landing.”
They got all their gear on and set off to explore the moon. Commander Daniel said,
“It is quiet, too quiet.”
In two seconds a blob of snot was all over Captain Lachlan. Commander Daniel heard a little sound coming over to him the sound came closer and….. A BIG Booger Monster came up behind Commander Daniel and gulped him in his throat. Captain Lachlan tried to get him out of the Booger Monster’s throat. Captain Lachlan swung on the booger monsters bits and pieces on its body and got Commander Daniel out and gently put him on the moon. Captain Lachlan got off the booger monster, into the ship and got out his rocket boosters and pushed as hard as he could to push the booger monster into the sun. And he did. He got back to the moon and got Commander Daniel and got back to Earth. They won awards from the Prime Minister. But a little blob of booger went on Captain Lachlan. Was the booger monster still alive?
THE END!
THE GALAXY FIGHT
One day at Earth, Captain Lachlan and Commander Daniel were going to the moon on
their spaceship. Everyone was cheering for them when they went aboard. In 10 seconds was the lift off and then they took off.
They were in space at last. Commander Daniel said, “Look, there’s the moon!” Captain Lachlan said, “We are landing.”
They got all their gear on and set off to explore the moon. Commander Daniel said,
“It is quiet, too quiet.”
In two seconds a blob of snot was all over Captain Lachlan. Commander Daniel heard a little sound coming over to him the sound came closer and….. A BIG Booger Monster came up behind Commander Daniel and gulped him in his throat. Captain Lachlan tried to get him out of the Booger Monster’s throat. Captain Lachlan swung on the booger monsters bits and pieces on its body and got Commander Daniel out and gently put him on the moon. Captain Lachlan got off the booger monster, into the ship and got out his rocket boosters and pushed as hard as he could to push the booger monster into the sun. And he did. He got back to the moon and got Commander Daniel and got back to Earth. They won awards from the Prime Minister. But a little blob of booger went on Captain Lachlan. Was the booger monster still alive?
THE END!
Writer's Notebook
Here is a narrative written by Daniel.
Nightmare at Preston Market.
I was at Preston Market with Peter S, Lachlan, James and Tomas. All of the sudden a $10 note glide slowly to the floor. I pick up the the note and kept walking with my friends. Then people started chasing us. We ran into the Men’s toilet and went into the cubicle.
“Why is this happening?, “I asked.
“We don’t know”, replied Lachlan, James and Peter.
“Maybe it’s the $10 note you picked up”, suggested Tomas.
Then the others kept saying flush the note. At this moment I started to think of what I could buy with $10. Maybe I could buy a laptop, Na, there’s no laptops that cost $10. It was too good to give up. Finally I gave up the note and flushed it.
When we got out of the toilet everything was back to normal.
“What a day”, we said together.
“Who’s up for lunch?”Tomas asked.
We all had lunch and went home.
~Next day~
Next day we saw an old man screaming into the toilets.
“Looks like someone picked up our problem”, I said.
Nightmare at Preston Market.
I was at Preston Market with Peter S, Lachlan, James and Tomas. All of the sudden a $10 note glide slowly to the floor. I pick up the the note and kept walking with my friends. Then people started chasing us. We ran into the Men’s toilet and went into the cubicle.
“Why is this happening?, “I asked.
“We don’t know”, replied Lachlan, James and Peter.
“Maybe it’s the $10 note you picked up”, suggested Tomas.
Then the others kept saying flush the note. At this moment I started to think of what I could buy with $10. Maybe I could buy a laptop, Na, there’s no laptops that cost $10. It was too good to give up. Finally I gave up the note and flushed it.
When we got out of the toilet everything was back to normal.
“What a day”, we said together.
“Who’s up for lunch?”Tomas asked.
We all had lunch and went home.
~Next day~
Next day we saw an old man screaming into the toilets.
“Looks like someone picked up our problem”, I said.
Writer's Notebook
Here is a narrative written by Riley.
Once there was a tattooist called Riley. He made an awesome tattoo a blue flaming guitar. He made millions, but his evil brother the Prince of Evil stole his idea. So Riley sued him and he became a millionaire and Cooper became homeless. Riley made millions and billions of dollars and became the richest guy in the U.S.A.
Once there was a tattooist called Riley. He made an awesome tattoo a blue flaming guitar. He made millions, but his evil brother the Prince of Evil stole his idea. So Riley sued him and he became a millionaire and Cooper became homeless. Riley made millions and billions of dollars and became the richest guy in the U.S.A.
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