Mika's Narrative

MSBA have been working on narrative writing during this term. Here is Mika's narrative to read and enjoy!


Sparkboy and the evil weather man
By McKenzie Facchinetti
 

SparkBoy’s story
“This week a series of tornadoes will hit Oklahoma. But don’t worry; they will only be the worst tornadoes in the history of tornadoes.” I knew they wouldn’t happen. It’s the middle of winter; anyway I’ve known that stupid weather man Mr. Flongg had been up to something for years. I had to find out.
 

So I got my bike and headed for Channel 48 broadcasting centre. As soon as I walked in, I heard…. “Mr. Anderson, get me some coffee, and make it snappy, we have to get down to the lair.” As soon as I heard them say lair I started following them.
I heard Flongg say “What should we do to shake up the tornado, raining snakes?"
 

Mr. Flongg’s story
I had a feeling someone was spying on me, that was because a 14 year old year old boy was looking right at me!!!!!
 

I looked at him, He looked at me, and he said, “Just to make this affective,” and then he snapped his fingers and said “I am SparkBoy” and he zapped me with electricity and knocked me out!
 

Mr. Anderson’s story…
I was clapping and laughing in joy until Flonggo woke up and hit the tornado button. We all rushed outside and there it was, a real life tornado!!! I was scared, so scared that I didn’t noticed Sparky knocked out Flonggo and well yeah. Sparky and I rushed downstairs and turned the tornado thing off!

2 years later
Life is going pretty well for me. I am Sparky’s new teacher and Flonggy’s in jail!!!!