Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Maddy's Narrative

Here is Maddy's narrative to read and enjoy.

Old or New House
By Maddy

We were watching TV and Dad came home and said “Do you want the good news or the bad news?” “Bad news” Lily shouted. “Ok, we are going to move house. We have until the end of school to be able to move, so you might want to start packing up,” Dad said. Mum also agreed. Everyone else was complaining. Lily, Isa and Maddy felt upset because they love their house and they don’t want to leave. Charlotte, Mum and Dad wanted to have some land and live in the country.
2 Months later……
The big new storage truck had arrived at our house. All the stuff was packed up, and we had said all our goodbyes. Maddy, Charlotte, Isa and Lily all went out the back of the house and made a hand print out of concrete. All of us decided to leave.
When they had to their new, ten acre, big, cool house they all ran inside to see what it was like. Once they were used to it and had all there furniture in, they started to like there new house. They even thought it was better than their old house. All of them liked school at Yarrambat and C.L.C. They all just had wonderful time.
THE END

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